First Blogging Feedback Reflection

The feedback on my blog was helpful. I found tremendous value in the raw observation of my blog. The organization of the blog was important to me, but I needed to be more focused on the needs of those who read my blog. There was an absence of pictures in my fourth post for example, and it was noticeable to those who were reviewing my blog. In the future, I will focus more on my thoughts and analyzation of the text as opposed to just a summery. The blogs that I read that were more focused on their own thoughts and ideas stemming from the text were more interesting and I will focus more on that style.